19考研英语一英语二写作专项解析

2018-12-26 09:50

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　　19考研英语一写作专项解析

　　本次写作A节是让考生写一封介绍信，写给想要了解支教的外国友人。首先，先要简单介绍一下本次活动的基本信息如：开始的日期，地点，持续的时长以及活动的目的，其次信件内容中需要涵盖的一些基本要求，相关的思路以及表达和句式在2010年招募志愿者的告示中都有提到过，只是换了一种考察方式。

　　本次大作文是关于个人品质的话题，试题给出了一幅图，内容是两个人爬山，一个人坐下说太累了，不爬了，另一个边爬边递给另一个一瓶水，说休息一下接着爬，可见这要需要对比两幅图画来归纳上图画的意旨：坚持的重要性。第一段在图片场景描述的过程中基本无较难词汇，主体段在描述过程中切忌只空谈大道理，要有相应的细节展开，针对此类抽象类的话题，例子就是很好的细节补充，此类抽象类话题也曾在2004年(起点即是终点)2007年(自信);2008年(合作)，2012年(乐观)以及2018年(创新的重要性)考察过，因此，在备考的过程中，真题依然对于我们来说有很高的借鉴意义，复习时应该以真题为主。

　　总体来说，本次考试题目难度适中，写作部分是对考生的语言能力的综合考察，考生在熟记一些写作框架的同时也一定要切记平时注意积累，避免出现文章过于框架化，无实质内容，过度依赖一些套句补充字数的现象出现。

　　【试题】

　　Directions:

　　Suppose you are working for the " Aiding Rural Primary School project of your university, write a letter to answer the inquiry from an international student volunteer. You need to specify the details of the project.

　　分析：

　　本次写作A节是让考生写一封介绍信，写给想要了解支教的外国留学生，首先，在在第一段陈述信件背景收到来信，并阐述写信目的。主体段介绍本次活动信息，先要简单介绍一下本次活动开始的日期，地点，持续的时长以及活动的目的，其次信件内容中需要涵盖的一些基本要求：如能够流利说中英文的能力，因为是贫困地区小学支教，因此要能与学生进行沟通。最后，最好相关经验或是从事过相关职业，或具备相关专业知识，这样才能有效地帮助当地学生提高英语能力，结尾段简单表达希望即可。

　　Dear friend,

　　I am happy to receive your letter and I am writing to offer your further information concerning the project of Aiding Rural Primary School as you expected in your letter.

　　Details can be listed as follows. First of all, this activity will begin on May 5th in 2019 and is expected to last for a month in a primary school in Guizhou Province. In addition, you’d better speak Chinese and English fluently because you have to explain some words that students are unfamiliar with in Chinese if necessary. Lastly, students with relevant experience are preferred.

　　I sincerely hope that the information above can help you know more about this activity and if you want more information about it, please don’t hesitate to contact me.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　【试题】

　　Directions:

　　Write an essay of 160-180 words based on the following picture.In your essay, you should

　　1) describe the picture briefly.

　　2) interpret its intended meaning, and

　　3) give your comments.

　　分析：

　　本次大作文与去年考察的题目类似，都属于抽象类话题，图片的内容和文字部分均无太难词汇出现，一些基础词汇即可应对，爬山：climb a moutain;累：exhausted或tired或是名词：tiredness：递水pass sb a bottle of water ：休息一下;have a rest。

　　主体段部分先点题：the importance of persistence。我们可以利用课上所讲的对比法进行论证，先正面阐述一些人已经意识到了坚持其实是成功之路的第一步，再进一步解释因为生活之中充满挑战，如果遇到困难就轻易放弃，就永远不可能成功，之后再利用课上讲过的有关坚持这一品质的名人例子来印证坚持的重要性。然后话费一转，还有一些人一遇到困难就会如图中另一人那样，选择临阵退缩，最终的结果就是一事无成。

　　结尾段再次回扣文章主题，坚持对于我们来说真的很重要，再给出相应建议具体建议。

　　【范文】

　　As is vividly depicted in this cartoon, there are two man climbing a mountain. One of them says that he is too exhausted to keep going, while the other one encourages his companion, saying that he can have a rest and then continue climbing and passing him a bottle of water at the same time.

　　The purpose of this drawing is to show us the importance of persistence. Some people have realized that our life is full of ups and downs and only persistence can lead to success. We may find numerous examples to illustrate the importance of perseverance with ease, and Thomas Edison is a good case in point. He made up his mind to find out the proper material for the bulb and he failed thousands of times,but he never gave up. Eventually, he succeeded. Without his persistence, we might have lived in the darkness at night now. However, some individuals fail to see it. When they are in difficulty, they may give up soon, ending up accomplishing nothing. This may exert negative impact on their study or work.

　　From my perspective, it is imperative for us to take measures to develop persistence. Firstly, we should be prepared to be patient, since perseverance may take much time and efforts. Secondly, you should adopt a new attitude towards success, since history tells us success never comes easily and only persistence can lead to success.

　　2019 考研英语作文解析

　　英语二：

　　本次写作A节是让考生写一封建议信，建议信是考研考试中比较常见的题型，本次题目要求建议辩论赛的论题以及解释理由，并说明你的安排。首先，指出辩论会的论题是如何解决现代城市中频繁出现的交通堵塞，只要与城市交通相关即可，接下来阐述相应理由。其次，your arrangement可以先要简单介绍一下本次活动的基本信息如：开始的日期，地点，持续的时长以及活动的目的等。

　　本次大作文是社会热点类话题，大学生毕业之后的去向，试题为动态图，此类题型曾在2017，2014，2011以及2010年考察过，在2013年的英语一考题中也曾出现(选择)，关键词的表达都是比较常见的词汇，升学其实指的就是考研，开头段部分可以直接套用动态表格写作框架，但需要注意时态的问题。主体段部分分别从直接找工作的人数变少，考研人数增多，以及创业人数增多三个角度进行分析，相关思路也是大家比较熟悉的，很贴近考生的生活。分析原因的时候还可以从政府以及个人角度进行更为细致的分析，结尾段需对这一趋势进行预测以及提出合理的建议。

　　【试题】

　　Directions：Suppose professor Smith ask you to plan a debate on the theme of city traffic, write an email to him.

　　1) Suggest a topic and with your reasons;

　　2) And your arrangement.

　　You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

　　Don’t use your own name, use “Zhang Wei” instead. Don’t write your address. (10 points)

　　【范文】

　　Dear Professor Smith,

　　There are so many topics concerning city traffic, among which the most popular one is traffic jam, so I propose that the forthcoming debate should focus on how to reduce traffic jam effectively in metropolis.

　　First of all, traffic jam is one of the problems that have troubled people living in major cities in recent years and it is closely bound up with our daily life, which may attract more students to participate in this debate. In addition, through this activity, we may put forward some feasible solutions to this problem. Furthermore, this debate will be held between 8 a.m. to 4 p.m. on the 19th of January in the Lecture Hall and we would be greatly honored if you could be present at the debate and give comments on these competitors.

　　I sincerely hope that there will be more students taking an active part in this debate and if you want further information about this activity, please contact me.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Zhang Wei

　　【试题】

　　Directions:

　　Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should

　　1) interpret the chart, and

　　2) give your comments.

　　You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.(15 points)

　　分析：

　　与去年考察方式不同，今年考查的是动态图表，高校毕业生毕业后的选择，一共三组数据，这三个关键词在课上都有涉及，在2013年英语一的试题中考察过类似话题，课上动态图表框架可以直接应用，但注意时态，从过去持续到现在，应该用现在完成时，变化的趋势用一些基本词汇就可表达出来，当然最后一组数据如果能够用double这个词就更好了，不会的话用increase sharply 也可以，整个题目不管是从图表的描述还是内容来讲都不是很难。

　　本次题目主体段部分要分析三个原因，第一为什么直接找工作的人数在减少，原因其实很简单，现在可心的工作不是很好找，找到的工作薪水又偏低。其次，图表中指的升学即课上讲过的考研，表达不唯一，那考研的目的是什么，这个最有发言权的就是大家自己，考研是为了在找工作大军中能够脱颖而出，比别人更有竞争力。第三，为什么创业人数激增，宏观层面就是政府为了支持大学生创业提出了很多优惠政策;微观层面，个人角度，相信大家不少人心中都曾经有个一个创业梦，自己做老板，因为时间更加灵活，可以做一些自己喜欢的事。第三段，对于这一趋势进行预测，还可以添加个人建议，无需太多，只需说明选择无分对错，适合自己的就是最好的。

　　总之，这次英语二题目不管是从图表描述还是原因分析上来看都比较简单，掌握基本描述词汇和句式，试题即可迎刃而解。

　　【范文】

　　As is illustrated in the bar chart, dramatic changes have taken place in the options for graduates in a certain university between 2013 to 2018. During the period, there has been a marked decrease from 68.1% to 60.7% in the percentage of students who wish to obtain employment, while that of those taking examinations for a graduate program has seen an opposite trend, increasing from 26.3% to 34.0%. Meanwhile, the percentage of graduates aiming at running their own business has doubled from 1.3% to 2.6%.

　　The factors that result in this phenomenon can be listed as follows. To begin with, with the job market becoming increasingly gloomy, more undergraduates find that the difficulty of obtaining a decent has been on the rise in recent years, and the income is lower than before. As a result, fewer and fewer students are willing to take up an occupation immeditely after graduation. In addition, pursuing further studies enables them to improve their career prospects and enhance their competitiveness. Accordingly, this choice is increasingly popular among them. Lastly, some preferential policies have been put forward by our government to encourage these graduates to start their own business and self employment allows them to have a more flexible schedule, and this is why the figure of this option rockets.

　　In summary, this trend is projected to continue in the foreseeable future. It is suggested that each student should make his or her own decision according to the actual situation instead of following suit blindly. Only in this way can they make an optimal choice.

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