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2017年12月托福写作真题回忆及范文赏析(一)
2018-04-27 09:31
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作者:
2017年12月2日
综合
阅读:
一幅照片被认为是19世纪20年代的摄影师A所做,理由如下:
1. 照片中景观 pine tree的形状独特,且在另一幅A的作品中见到过
2. 底片有手写地名,与A的妻子的笔迹相似,可能是A妻子帮忙其整理时所写
3. 照片有经历过火灾的迹象,而众所周知的是A 的摄影棚经历过火灾
听力:反对
1. 照片中的pine tree 是当地著名的一个景观,有很多摄影师都拍过其照片
2. 底片中地点的名字有拼写错误,而A的妻子从小就在该景观附近生活,所以不太可能是A妻子笔迹。
3. 当时洗照片时会用一种可燃物质,所以很多摄影师的底片都有火灾的痕迹
独立:
If you can change one aspect to improve your health, which would you choose? Why?
- The kind of food
- The amount of exercise
- The amount of stress
写作思路解析
这道题目问:为了提升健康,我们应该是控制食物摄入的类别,调整运动量,还是调节自身经受的压力。该题在2015年最后一场12月20日考过。
有不少学生拿到题目之后首先想到的是控制吃的,因为吃多了就会胖,胖了就不健康……
作为一名120斤而且以此为由经常不锻炼的瘦子,翔哥果断选择第二个。因为身体锻炼对健康的好处很好写,上过翔哥课的都有学过相关思路和表达,可以谈及现代人久坐的生活方式导致各种健康问题的出现,每周定期定量的运动可以保证人四肢的灵活,活力的充沛,久而久之,生活态度会更积极乐观。
此外,只要锻炼身体这一习惯养成,人们自然会主动去关注一日三餐,这样会补充体力,有更好的身体和精神去运动。而且,运动本身就是调节压力非常好的方式,不管你是喜欢跑步或者是打篮球,每个人几乎都能找到属于自己的运动减压的方式。
范文
Nowadays, modern people tend to focus much more on how to become a better person. Some suppose that having a healthier diet is more important while others insist that maybe a relaxing life can actually help. However, from my perspective, I consider doing more exercise will be the best choice. My view point is based on the following reasons and examples.
To begin with, taking more exercise can lead to a better body condition. As we all know, individuals keeping regular exercise are less vulnerable than those sitting in front of television all the time. Sports such as basketball or tennis will strengthen one’s immune system. For example, there is a famous master of Chinese martial art called ZhangWeidong. Surprisingly, when he was just a little boy, he suffered a lot from his weak physical condition. Every two weeks he would have a fever, coughing and sneezing, which made his parents extremely worried. In order to improve his son’s health condition, ZhangWeidong’s father brought him to a fight master studying boxing. Through continuous exercise, little ZhangWeidong gradually got rid of the entanglement of diseases. Master Zhang is not an expectation. Actually, thousands of children improve their physical condition through various kinds of sports. Thus supports the fact that exercise can help us attain a stronger body.
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