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2016吉林高考英语作文点评-长春新东方

2016-06-11 09:31

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作者:新东方

  在刚刚结束的2016年高考英语考试中,作文这一板块依旧延续了应用性文体的特点,难度适中,留给学生自主发挥的空间很大,便于学生在短时间内写出一篇高分作文。以下是针对本次作文的具体答题步骤和句式应用的解析:

  1.审题

  针对已经给出的背景知识,我们可以明确文章应采用的体裁是应用文,应采用第一人称写作,主要的时态范畴是一般现在时和一般将来时,写作的目的是征求友人的摄影作品。

  2.抓要点

  用一两个单词或短语写出每句的细节要点。

  背景句: hold a Photography Show

  主旨句: provide some pictures

  细节点:theme: environmental protection;

  time: it is due to start *** and end ***

  contact: intlphotoshow @ gmschool. com

  3.扩展成句

  根据所列要点,运用适当的句型、时态,关联词将短语组成长句,注意修饰和逻辑。

  背景句:同位语从句 + 非谓语动词

  I am glad to tell you the good news that our school photography club will hold an International High School Student Photography Show.

  主旨句:定语从句 + 非谓语动词

  Would you like to provide some attractive pictures you took for us?

  要点一:非限定性定语从句

  The theme of the show is environmental protection, to which residents have attached great importance in the past few years.

  要点二:非限定性定语从句 + 并列句

  As scheduled, it is due to start on June 10 and last for two weeks.

  扩展句:形式宾语 it

  I think it a good chance that your works will be shown in this activity.

  At the same time, many a student will appreciate the wonderful pictures.

  要点三:状语从句

  If you are interested in joining the activity, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow @ gmschool. com

  结尾句:非谓语动词

  I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

  4.连句成文

  依据篇章结构,连句成文。在连句成文之前,考生一定要对文章的篇章结构有个合理清晰的构想:要点的先后排列顺序和语篇衔接是否得当、层次是否清楚、结构是否一目了然、主谓是否一致、开头结尾逻辑关系是否自然、意思是否表达清楚、中心是否突出。

  以下是范文,仅供参考:

  Dear Peter,

  I am glad to tell you the good news that our school photography club will hold an International High School Student Photography Show. Would you like to provide some attractive pictures you took for us? Here is the information in detail.

  As scheduled, it is due to start on June 10 and last for two weeks.The theme of the show is environmental protection, to which the residents have attached great importance in the past few years. I think it a good chance that your works will be shown in this activity. At the same time, many a student will appreciate the wonderful pictures. If you are interested in joining the activity, you can send your photos to intlphotoshow @ gmschool. com.

  I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

  5.查错改错

  复读作文,检查修改。打完草稿后要认真检查,修改润色,避免不必要的错误。主要注意以下几个方面:①要点是否遗漏,文体格式是否正确。②时态语态是否错误,主谓是否一致。③句子结构、关联词是否恰当。④名词的数、代词的性数格、现在分词、过去分词、冠词等是否符合英语的习惯。⑤单词的拼写是否有误等。

  6.规范抄写

  定稿成文,规范抄写,书写一定要美观。

  预祝同学们在英语考试中取得好成绩!


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