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2016年1月9日托福写作范文3-长春新东方

2016-01-13 17:25

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 2016.1.9托福写作题目

  Some people think starting school day early is a good approach to support learning while others think starting later is better. What is your opinion?

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  Increasing study efficiency has never failed to gain traction among the general public. Then appears the controversy whether starting school day early is a good approach to support learning or not. From my perspective, though the time spent in studying can be elongated, I still question the benefits of getting up early will be overshadowed by the possible drawbacks.

  To begin with, thanks to the stricter rules and regulations set by school, students have already been exhausted and getting up too early will take a massive toll on students’ physical and mental state. Specifically speaking, the continually employment pressure increases the requirements to current students, which can be illustrated by the established disciplines and arranged academic assignments in an increasing quantity. Take current high school students as an example. Except for the necessity of studying the fundamental subjects such as Mathematics, Physics and so forth that occur to be substantially challenging to the majority of students, a wider range of optional courses are orchestrated into the required list. In addition, it can be seen quite frequently that the weekends and possible leisure time have also been taken up by various kinds of training or art courses with parents’ expectation to diversify their children’s multiple techniques. Obviously, without a good rest, students are less capable of adjusting themselves to embrace the subsequent challenges.

  To be followed, more children are sent to schools by their parents and starting school early requires their parents to get up early. Undoubtedly, parents will suffer the synchronous loss and the fierce competition occurring to citizens makes it necessary for them to keep energetic and highly efficient everyday. However, how could an employee maintain productive and effective without good rest? Once the rule of starting school early is carried out, it is not hard to perceive that parents work in the office, wearing dark circles under their eyes sparked by inadequate sleep. The worse is that not only does long period of keeping a bad state lead to the decline of work efficiency but also trigger the possible traffic accidents. The annual released statistics reveals that the primary contributor to traffic accidents are fatigue and distraction both caused by the insufficiency of sleep. Apparently, asking kids to start school early will cause damage to both kids themselves and their family.

  Granted, to some extent, there might be a kind of voice surfacing that getting up early can help keep good attitude and passion. Meanwhile, students can have more available time to make wise arrangement about the a-whole-time schedule and the reasonable utilization of time will take an important role in increasing study efficiency. It seems to be sensible, however, let’s take a closer look at current situation that most students are involved in. Evidently, the deficiency of sleeping time is becoming a huge obstacle to undermine students’ study efficiency.

  In a word, the flaws of starting school early far surpass the benefits. To ensure children’s higher study efficiency and parents’ safety, please give them more sleeping time.


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